ext_99205 ([identity profile] twosen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ciircee 2010-11-15 03:56 pm (UTC)

*de-lurks* I read your stuff! Although irregularly, I must admit, and I probably could comment more *shifty eyes* Let's remedy that!

Depressing isn't exactly the right word for it; I'd say they're just more nitty-gritty-realistic, since being a rainbow boyband doesn't mean it's always all sunshine and puppies.

- Poor tired!Aiba :((( But it's so like Aiba not to know his own limits and to feel guilty about 5 days to recover from a collapsed lung >__>
- Aiba sounds like Sho! <3 Kinda like what they say about fivesomes couples who spend a lot of time together...
- ShimuKen! ShimuKen is totally awesomesauce and needs to be written more ♥

- Ohno + 6-year-long gf! Somehow, as terrible as it sounds, I can't really imagine what Ohno's relationships are like. But I'd love to have Riida's love life / gf / wedding just casually brought up in conversation one day in the random talk bit they do before the guest appears on Shiyagare (Sho: "Oh, and by the way, Satoshi-kun, congrats on your firstborn!")
- You write the side of Ohno that the public doesn't see incredibly well; even though it's not the slightly spacey / child-like / laid-back man that a lot of fics might characterise him as, it doesn't seem out of character in the slightest.
- I can't help feeling that this ficlet has probably the highest chance of being really, actually true though, and that's what makes it all the more heart-rending ;___;

- Aw, this ficlet is so... Nino. (Actually, all the ficlets capture the essence of each member perfectly, but somehow this needs to be said more =P)
- Nino-mama <333 I'm totally a closet Nino fan, but I'm sorry, Nino-mama totally pwns her spawn XDD
- B-but holey underwear is comfy underwear! *___*

- Cheer up, emo-kid
- Shun! And Jun the drunk-gay-ass-man! (On second thoughts, those adjectives should probably not be strung all together at once...)
- Somehow you write Jun's drunk POV so well it all kinda swims into focus. *awed at how that works*

- Sho mail! Having my own adventure! = D'AWWW.
- His secret hope that his family would be there is just... ;___; And he so would cheer himself up by thinking like that, you're right!
- Again, this ficlet is hard-hitting since it feels like it's quite possibly a factlet rather than a ficlet.

ASDFGHJKL; Beautiful writing as always! I'm sorry for the random comment; I'll stop doing the creepy random commenter thing now.

*re-lurks*

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