ext_382407 ([identity profile] beltenebra.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ciircee 2009-03-27 12:58 pm (UTC)

Love, love, Love the whole thing. Espcially this:

"Me too," Nino said. "Cold, hard cash."

"…" said Aiba skeptically.

"Change," Nino explained. "Ice-cold coins right down his butt-crack."


Oh Nino, never change. ::grin:: If these are the bits that aren't making the cut... well suffice to say I am eagerly anticipating the rest. As always, thank you for writing!

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