stars! stars in my eyes! GOSH i love supernatural style stories (not... the show, obviously), and this universe you've created is just great, with a really vivid and complete feeling. and um poooooorn. :D? :D?? i love sho in this--his love and protectiveness and fear and cluelessness--it's all GREAT.
this:
Aiba puts his hands on his hips. The fact that he's naked does not make this as imposing as he probably wishes it did but it does make Sho smile a little. "Shower," he repeats. Sho looks at Jun. Aiba looks at Jun, too. "Did you tell him he couldn't?" he asks. "Sho-chan, just ignore him and shower. He told me I couldn't either but I did."
may be the best breakdown of the jun/aiba dynamic ever. XD
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Date: 2010-11-16 07:17 am (UTC)this:
Aiba puts his hands on his hips. The fact that he's naked does not make this as imposing as he probably wishes it did but it does make Sho smile a little. "Shower," he repeats. Sho looks at Jun. Aiba looks at Jun, too. "Did you tell him he couldn't?" he asks. "Sho-chan, just ignore him and shower. He told me I couldn't either but I did."
may be the best breakdown of the jun/aiba dynamic ever. XD