Repost PLUS!
Aug. 21st, 2010 02:02 amThis was my
je_fqfest assigment! A fic written for
imifumei. I...really wish I could have written something better for her.
I'm fairly certain that everybody knew this one was mine. Because of the scene breaks and because when I write everybody turns into a constantly-nodding-looking-glancing-sighing-breathing-moaning-squishy-feeling'ed moron. Seriously with the nodding and sighing and bantering. It's like they're annoyingly vocal bobble-heads. They all 'gesture' or 'make a gesture' and they can't keep their hands out of their hair and they laugh and smile all the time. They're VAPID, vocal bobble-heads. And when they hit orgasm it's all over in a paragraph. Or less.
I am so sorry.
Title:Between Friends
Pairing: Oguri Shun/Ikuta Toma/Matsumoto Jun. Or Oguri Shun WITH Ikuta Toma/Matsumoto Jun (and with a mention of Oguri Shun's relationship with Yamada Yu)
Rating:NC-17. A.K.A. Porn and Orgasms Warnings: Threesome? Drinking and smoking? By people old enough to engage in drinking, smoking and threesomes? A little rough play? Some minimal-risk unprotected sex?
Summary: Jun has a guys night in with Shun and Toma. This leads tohaving a guys night in wink wink, nudge nudge sex. As these things so often do.
( 'You know, the thing about poker and Jun' Shun said brightly. 'In,' called Toma, tossing his chips into the pot. 'Oh, god, Shun, go home,' Jun muttered as Shun shoved his entire pile of chips into the center of the table. )
*********
Because I really do feel bad about this, I wrote some extra bits. Scenes from their past, the present, and the near future. I'm not saying they're great but they're SOMETHING more than what's up there.
( And then he'd had Toma's hand in his, had slipped his own ring over Toma's finger. 'I won't forget you, you know' )
( I'm not saying I sat down with Nino over beers and that the talk turned from sex and relationships to you and Toma )
( I want you to stay )
*******
I really wish I could have done better.
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I'm fairly certain that everybody knew this one was mine. Because of the scene breaks and because when I write everybody turns into a constantly-nodding-looking-glancing-sighing-breathing-moaning-squishy-feeling'ed moron. Seriously with the nodding and sighing and bantering. It's like they're annoyingly vocal bobble-heads. They all 'gesture' or 'make a gesture' and they can't keep their hands out of their hair and they laugh and smile all the time. They're VAPID, vocal bobble-heads. And when they hit orgasm it's all over in a paragraph. Or less.
I am so sorry.
Title:Between Friends
Pairing: Oguri Shun/Ikuta Toma/Matsumoto Jun. Or Oguri Shun WITH Ikuta Toma/Matsumoto Jun (and with a mention of Oguri Shun's relationship with Yamada Yu)
Rating:NC-17. A.K.A. Porn and Orgasms Warnings: Threesome? Drinking and smoking? By people old enough to engage in drinking, smoking and threesomes? A little rough play? Some minimal-risk unprotected sex?
Summary: Jun has a guys night in with Shun and Toma. This leads to
( 'You know, the thing about poker and Jun' Shun said brightly. 'In,' called Toma, tossing his chips into the pot. 'Oh, god, Shun, go home,' Jun muttered as Shun shoved his entire pile of chips into the center of the table. )
*********
Because I really do feel bad about this, I wrote some extra bits. Scenes from their past, the present, and the near future. I'm not saying they're great but they're SOMETHING more than what's up there.
( And then he'd had Toma's hand in his, had slipped his own ring over Toma's finger. 'I won't forget you, you know' )
( I'm not saying I sat down with Nino over beers and that the talk turned from sex and relationships to you and Toma )
( I want you to stay )
*******
I really wish I could have done better.