[Reposted because I left out a very important bit XD;;]
I'm sorry to hear/read that you had a sucky day. *HUG* I hope writing this made you feel better, because it certainly made MY day wonderful.
EEEEE I love Nino's resistance to Ohno is in the form of the rest of his bandmates. Who aren't actually all that good at helping him resist at all, really. (Also, Nino is terrible at lying to the people who love him most; how can he expect to hide anything from his sister? And Aiba ♥ His driver must love him [and all of them] a hell of a lot.)
Oh man, the best thing about the kiss scene (and have I told you how much I love you kiss scenes?) is that there is a conversation before it. There's this thrumming UST between the two of them, prone on the bed and facing each other, and they just talk about domestic, homely things back on Niijima for the longest time until Ohno can't stand it anymore.
I still ache a little at Nino wanting the relationship so badly and kind of wanting to not want this badly and is still willing to make himself a secret in Ohno's life if he can, and Ohno not letting him because Ohno won't hide something that important to him. Did that make sense? Well, it's beautiful.
My favourite line? This last one:
He looks at Nino, and at Nino, and the world right there in his hands and he goes to back to work.
It says so much about Ohno's state of mind right then, and his character, and if I tried to explain the way I took it I am going to write something longer than half your fic. So just know that I love it and think you're really a writer who excels at capturing moments and the feelings in them.
This is...kind of all over the place, but really, thank you for writing and sharing this ♥
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Date: 2010-11-21 06:39 am (UTC)I'm sorry to hear/read that you had a sucky day. *HUG* I hope writing this made you feel better, because it certainly made MY day wonderful.
EEEEE I love Nino's resistance to Ohno is in the form of the rest of his bandmates. Who aren't actually all that good at helping him resist at all, really. (Also, Nino is terrible at lying to the people who love him most; how can he expect to hide anything from his sister? And Aiba ♥ His driver must love him [and all of them] a hell of a lot.)
Oh man, the best thing about the kiss scene (and have I told you how much I love you kiss scenes?) is that there is a conversation before it. There's this thrumming UST between the two of them, prone on the bed and facing each other, and they just talk about domestic, homely things back on Niijima for the longest time until Ohno can't stand it anymore.
I still ache a little at Nino wanting the relationship so badly and kind of wanting to not want this badly and is still willing to make himself a secret in Ohno's life if he can, and Ohno not letting him because Ohno won't hide something that important to him. Did that make sense? Well, it's beautiful.
My favourite line? This last one:
He looks at Nino, and at Nino, and the world right there in his hands and he goes to back to work.
It says so much about Ohno's state of mind right then, and his character, and if I tried to explain the way I took it I am going to write something longer than half your fic. So just know that I love it and think you're really a writer who excels at capturing moments and the feelings in them.
This is...kind of all over the place, but really, thank you for writing and sharing this ♥