I just. And then he. And then Machida--And then Sho. I don't even know where to start with how fucking amazing this was.
I loved everything building. I love how it started as a joke but they both liked the joke so much they just kept it up. Because that's so them. It wasn't like it was a very hard thing to do, they liked each other enough, right?
And then. But really, I just. The laughing during the sex. Okay, no, really. So many people take sexy times and make them into serious times, but for anyone that has had sex? It can be hilarious. And when you're turned on and so deliriously happy and then the person you're with is making that wonderful sound and you're both laughing and kissing and completely out of your minds breathless........
Yeah. You say you admire my realism, but that right there? It goes under the 'unconventional sexy', but it was so, SO true. Especially to their ages! It was adorable and hot and made my heart so full it could BURST.
And Ohno's choreography. Yes. YES. This metaphor is something I will always love and have to try not to consciously steal because... Clunky and fumbling and flailing but perfect. Also, Ohno wanting to compare sizes later, lolteenageboys.
I'm probably going to reread this again, it was so great. THANK YOU FOR AN AMAZING BIRTHDAY FIC, I AM NOW MORE MOTIVATED TO GET SOMETHING COMPARABLY GOOD DONE FOR YOU, ALTHOUGH I DOUBT I'LL QUITE MAKE IT.
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Date: 2011-04-26 05:22 am (UTC)I just. And then he. And then Machida--And then Sho. I don't even know where to start with how fucking amazing this was.
I loved everything building. I love how it started as a joke but they both liked the joke so much they just kept it up. Because that's so them. It wasn't like it was a very hard thing to do, they liked each other enough, right?
And then. But really, I just. The laughing during the sex. Okay, no, really. So many people take sexy times and make them into serious times, but for anyone that has had sex? It can be hilarious. And when you're turned on and so deliriously happy and then the person you're with is making that wonderful sound and you're both laughing and kissing and completely out of your minds breathless........
Yeah. You say you admire my realism, but that right there? It goes under the 'unconventional sexy', but it was so, SO true. Especially to their ages! It was adorable and hot and made my heart so full it could BURST.
And Ohno's choreography. Yes. YES. This metaphor is something I will always love and have to try not to consciously steal because... Clunky and fumbling and flailing but perfect. Also, Ohno wanting to compare sizes later, lolteenageboys.
I'm probably going to reread this again, it was so great. THANK YOU FOR AN AMAZING BIRTHDAY FIC, I AM NOW MORE MOTIVATED TO GET SOMETHING COMPARABLY GOOD DONE FOR YOU, ALTHOUGH I DOUBT I'LL QUITE MAKE IT.