A fic that took TEN minutes!

[ciircee]

a kiss, and all was said.
AN ARASHI FICTION QUEST.

nicefinalbeam is genius. I love this challenge. This is my current entry, such as it were. I don't think it quite qualifies. Mostly I just wanted to write something for a little while before I had to go to work.




"Oh, god, when did this start?" Sho shrieks.

"GROSS," Jun adds.

"Hi Leader, hi Nino," says Aiba, slinging his bag to the floor.

Nino pulls his slick, soft mouth away with an almost obscene slurping sound. "Hey," he says.

Ohno licks his lips. They feel full and bruised and really, really damp. He wants to kiss Nino again. He wants to kiss him more and more and even more.

"When the hell did this start?" Sho demands again.

Nino's arms tighten around Ohno's waist, his hands are warm and light at the small of Ohno's back. It's very comfortable. "About ten minutes ago," Nino answers Sho.

"Ick," says Jun.

"You were keeping track?" Ohno asks Nino. He smoothes his hands along Nino's back, touching the dip of his spine and then sweeping up to touch at his shoulder blades.

"I looked at the clock before you jumped me," Nino tells him. "Hi, by the way."

"Hi," Ohno responds.

"I meant how long have you two been—" and Sho flaps his hands at them illustratively.

"Dating," Aiba translates.

Ohno doesn't know what it is he and Nino are doing. He just knows that he walked into the greenroom and kissed Nino on the mouth instead of on the cheek like always. He doesn't know why he did it, just that Nino kissed him back and they spent ten minutes kissing each other with tongue.

Nino looks at him and Ohno knows Nino can read his mind because Nino grins at him and drops a quick kiss on his lips. "Ten minutes," says Nino.

And Ohno thinks it has probably been a couple of years, at least, but Sho and Jun make the world's most charming trauma faces. "Maybe eleven now," he corrects.

"Congratulations," says Aiba, giving them a thumbs up.

"Not in front of me. Never again," Sho tells Nino, shaking a finger at him.

"Please not in front of me," Jun asks Ohno. This is because he knows Ohno is weak to him and won't do it if Jun asks him so sweetly and seriously.

Still, Ohno wonders when he can kiss Nino again. "Turn around," he says.

At the same time as Nino says, "Turn around if you don't like it."

They're already leaning together and Nino's mouth is so, so warm.

Comments

[nicefinalbeam.livejournal.com]

I barely slept last night, or I should say this morning, and design will be the death of me, but then I see this fic! This lovely, lovely fic, and I'm all smiles. ♥

[ill-ame.livejournal.com]

No deadlines, oooo. Sounds like my kind of challenge. And honestly, there are some fics where I find that just plain kissing is sexier than porn. :D

This was really sweet. ♥ ♥ I love all the bitching. I love how Aiba doesn't blink an eye. I love the talking in synch at the end, oh Ohmiya...

And of course, I love you. ♥

[tangiblewhimsy.livejournal.com]

This scenario could happen. Forget the butt-groping, Ohno just walks in and sticks his tongue in Nino's mouth.

"Well hello to you too!"

Love it! ♥

[imifumei.livejournal.com]

This is so cute! Poor Sho and Jun, but I honestly love how blasé Aiba is about it, though. ♥

[flange5.livejournal.com]

I love how ambiguous Ohno's "turn around" could be ^_~

But this is adorable&hearts

I believe that "maybe eleven" may be the most adorably scrupulous answer possible. Ilike the idea of Nino randomly grabbing Ohno's phone to text Sho and and Jun updated times, with additional bases gained, for the next week ^_^

&hearts

[blufox-o7.livejournal.com]

And Ohno thinks it has probably been a couple of years, at least, but Sho and Jun make the world's most charming trauma faces. "Maybe eleven now," he corrects.

I don't know how I can love your drabbles even more. You're just amazing.

[hungry-worm.livejournal.com]

Trauma faces! Hee! ♥

[jade-lil.livejournal.com]

how can i not love this one! so freaking awesome~ and the trauma faces got me giggling like crazy!!

OMG i'm voting for this!!!!!!!

[tsuriken-pg.livejournal.com]

~♥

[satoyan]

eeeeeeeee, so good. I love all of this, every line. It is so sweet and hot and Arashi and funny and hot and warm... it's just wonderful. ♥♥♥

[aatash.livejournal.com]

♥!!

[i-am-zan.livejournal.com]

short sharp and to the point - love it. totally.

[ulilulelo.livejournal.com]

so sexy I can't stop smiling somehow >:^D

[nande-daiyo.livejournal.com]

Oh hi,

This is nice.

[agnes-yunita.livejournal.com]

This is very refreshing fic just kiss...but eleven minutes...ohchan really want jun shock face very much..funny fun fun..^^

[ggumilgeoya.livejournal.com]

ohhh this was so so cute ... you just gotta love their love for each other ^^

[rio-sora.livejournal.com]

haha, it's hilarious n sweet^^
lol at jun n sho trauma n aiba simplicity^^
love it so much, it's cute n adorable!
thanks for sharing~ <333

[elfiepike.livejournal.com]

trauma faces! brilliant. XD XD

[still-ciircee.livejournal.com]

They have such expressive faces! And really, they might expect Ohmiya to happen but they do not expect to walk in on it with no warning whatsoever.

Hi. Still really happy.

[elfiepike.livejournal.com]

lolol now i'm imagining that they expect advance warning of some kind--would a text message suffice? do there need to be signs around the area? hahaha.

♥ ♥ ♥!

[ggumilgeoya.livejournal.com]

kya. too freaking cute. :D